Tuesday, March 13, 2018
Yoga
Eight years ago on a certain day, Yoga first time rushed into my life. At that time, My work was very busy, my doughter was three years old and my son was one and half years old, so everyday I have a lot of things to do, l felt tired and stressed. But when I met yoga, yoga changed my life, It let me relax and happy, meanwhile my body got exercise. From then I was in love with yoga.
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Very nice introduction to how you fell in love with yoga!
ReplyDeleteYou've remembered to use past tense for most parts, only missing out "everyday I had a lot of things to do". :-)
A couple of minor corrections:
Yoga came into my life for the first time.
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It relaxes me and makes me happy.
Dear Penny,Thank you so much 😍🌹🌹🌹
DeleteOh, could you change the language setting into English? It might be difficult for other teachers to navigate. :-)
ReplyDelete"But when I met yoga, [it] changed my life." (try to avoid repetition!)
ReplyDeleteWhat is the purpose of your blog? What are we going to learn about here?
Dear Theresa,Thanks for your correction.
DeleteI created my blog account to exercise my writing, and I liked do yoga, l wish I can become a yoga instructor in one day.
That's great! I wish you good luck in your goal.
DeleteWhat I mean is, what is the purpose of the blog for the readers. What will readers learn or understand when they check your blog? When you write, you need to identify your target audience (who will read your writing?) and your goal (what do you want them to learn or understand?).
Hi Theresa, thank you for your suggestions, before it didn’t make sense, but now I get it. Thank you
DeleteAriel, for your next post, maybe you can talk about the different kinds of yoga and the one type that you like and why. It'll be a great way to learn about the yoga language that you'll need as a yoga instructor in the future!
ReplyDeleteOkay, Penny, I’d like to try. Thanks for your advice.
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